Terminal Moraine

beautiful..evocative..totally played out~loved it loved it~
*sometimes words fail to express appreciation*

Thank you Nidhi,
have a wonderful day :)

different lives
like things that dont mix, yet-
mixes to form milk,
will touch

different eyes
like languages from far,
speaks-love,
see beauty as none

touch - see- feel
... live

I envy you .. how beautifully you can express and in no time at all..
thanks for this too ..
and many thanks for the precious comment! Love you .. :D

wow! dont have words D... Was the last stanza with a bit of masti... or is it just my minds eye day dreaming...??? lol!!!

I have always envied Indra's ability to comment in verse form..he is such an impulsive poet :)

ah! this is pathetic that people now like the poem on FB because this is not for pushing the "like" button rather to be relished, contemplated, to be carried in heart *sigh*

Nilesh .. wow.. I liked that interpretation and also your wandering mind's eye ..
thanksssssss for the comment!
they are very precious!

Nidhi .. right.. I agree @ Indra's ability! its unique..
and muaaahhh for empathizing @ like button on FB.. hehe

u have left me speechless....so marvellously written....i m at loss of words to appreciate...have read very few writing like this...god bless u n ur pen to keep writing such wonderful poems.

Thank you PK.. for you lovely comment and thanks always for encouraging .. means much.. have a nice weekend.

The very first thing that came to my mind reading this was - So you think you can tell, heaven from hell. we're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year...... wish you were here - Pink Floyd!

I can't say how overwhelmed I am!

I hope to meet you someday!

Thank you Rakesh..
I also hope to meet you someday - really.. :)
am quite a boring/distracted company but I've a feeling that you can put up with introverts..
take care.

The tone seems disparate and defeating but the images are expansive, as usual. Nice

Hi Goatman.. trust you are doing well.. nice to see you, thanks. :)

I stand aghast, a weed amongst willows.
A simple creature I; asking God to please forgive me for being a fool.

At least, these days, I think I understand your poems again :).

Your wordplay is always so fascinating. It's like a trapeze artiste in action, making it look all too easy, unless one tries himself.

And now from sublime to ridiculous, in my usual style, that coherent glimpse of love reminded me of:

"palbhar ke liye koi hamne pyaar kar le, jhoota hi sahi ..."

Kill me. Seriously, I deserve it.

regards,
asuph

Asuph.. when people start 'understanding' my poem.. I get really scared.. you've actually 'nailed' it with that 'one line' :O
amazed! Thank you so much for the comment.

Goatman.. is everything ok? :( visited your blog too for a clue.. no success.. take care..

... ah--this is excellent--refreshing, too. Damn good to see you back. And for some reason, I'm fixing on "bulwark". Just a great word, and in just the right place.

Looking at these last three... looks like you might've pushed through the wall?--be onto something new...

Perry.. Hi! Delighted to see you! hope your are doing well.. :) nothing deliberate.. whatever happens.. happens on its own... but nice to know there's something different from the usual..

Yeah...tell me about it. I think people should meet when the sun is shining and the setting is not romantic. A lightening should be interpreted as forewarning not foreplay!