Terminal Moraine

You are bored about the way you write?????? About the way you can connect abstracts with life and still make it sound so real? About the ability to paint stages of life that are totally different in mood and still symmetric? About the manner in which you can evoke emotion and still make it sound pretty much like normal?

I'm mighty surprised!

oh there is so much to your writing, so many facets. i read it once and absorb just a tiny little part of it. i read it again, to understand may be a little more. this way, i unravel the complex tangle of emotions that you had fallen prey to when you wrote all that you wrote. and i love it. i can never get enough of your words because there is always so much yet to be understood aria..never say you're bored.

yours is one of the two blogs i read..

"I reminisce over
your lies, which took aim, had no point, theatrical,
enacted on tiny stage, for a tiddly audience; you & I "

I liked this very much. The boon/bane of a poet is to get bored and still write about it eloquently. It is like storing sadness in little bottles and objectively admiring the various shapes it dissolves to.

If this is boredom, I can only imagine what comes when you are engaged. Your poetry is always top notch in my book

Thank you everyone, for your kind words :)

Well I think it flows well (I especially like the "tiddly audience") How expressive.
You touch on mood and emotion, never always positive and pleasant as we live on and in this life, and others'.

Bored? Perhaps add photos for trim.

Just kidding . . . . Your words need no graphics, necessarily.

maybe you should try a different genre... that of hope and positivity..

Goatman .. thank you :) One is 'bored' sometimes of just about anything ..

Gyanban.. I can't 'try' to write. I write whatever comes to my mind and I think hope and positivity are misnomers .. thanks for dropping by.

aria..i so agree with ur reply to Gyan..!

... alien faith, robber of predictabilities--and I like your "delineation" of the void. It's hard to set down a good void.

... a little darker and a little stranger than the last one. If I had to give an impression--I would say a stream mumbling, somewhere, in a cave.

"the robber of predictabilities".......such construction...its reverberates for long time after reading...

What a way to tell your writing that you're bored with it! Personally, I like this very much. But there will be these stages when we would be bored with writing what everyone seems to be enjoying/liking. I have no answers/suggestions. It may heal on its own :)

cheers,
asuph

For a change, you should write a blog on your encounters with Matrimonial website weirdos. That should take care of the boredom (for a while)

lol, iw. looks like you're trying to get rid of your boredom.

asuph,

Boredom is one ailment.. I can never get afflicted with.

I am working for same company for past 10 Yrs.. Never got bored.

Working on same application software for past 13 yrs.. Never got bored.

Staying alone in an alien land.. away from home for 10yrs.. Never got bored.

Been eating potatoes 365 Days a year * 30++ odd years.. Never got bored.

And so on.. and so on.. and so on :))

Wildflower .. Thanks! I knew you would agree. :D

Perry .. Ohh yeah the void.. though its very much the same its tough to describe.. thank you for your comment.

Noni .. glad you liked. Hope you’ve been well.. its been really long ..

Asuph .. I am really happy to see your comment :) thanks, always.

Parikrama ji .. good idea but I’ve had such weird experiences that if I start setting 'em down most people would think I’m making it up ..but I’ll give it a try this weekend.. and then we can compare notes.. :D what say you ? ahem.. thanks for dropping by and for the idea to kill the boredom heh..

Now you are talking.. :)

Mere pass toh sab acche waale experience hein. I end up liking every girl that I see there (on website) . It's so hard to settle for just one. Har kisi mein koi na koi likeable baat hein. It's terribly unfair this whole marriage (choosing just ONE person) thing.

agree to Parikrama...really its sad/cruel institutional ritual that settle for just one.....they all loving and likable some way (not only website..everywhere)

I like ‘em all too. I mean the girls. Now don’t call me a feminist again, the truth is, most girls are nice. Its tough to find ‘one nice guy’! Pehle toh jaldi koi pasand hi nahi aata.. and then I find only weirdoes everywhere or perhaps such is my luck. And the sad part is, some of them conceal their ‘fakeness’ so very well .. I am sick of getting duped or maybe as my folks say I am way too gullible.. and men … sigh ..

on personal note...of course u r not feminist...keep patience..and don't expect "prince charming" ..(fitted one for u probably someone who keep a ocean inside him :))

Iam quite old now, ‘mills and boons’ days are long over so I don’t expect prince charming, for that matter I expect nothing. I find marriage the most boring institution. I don’t even care to marry heh :) however I really am checking some weirdoes out on a matrimonial site just to please my parents and what began as fun ..isn’t funny anymore..

pS – Parikrama thinks am ‘feminist’! *grin*

"isn’t funny anymore.. " got it..simply sorry..(realize mine was really loose comment)

ohh no, there is nothing to be sorry, really. I don;t think your comment was loose..
we are just having some harmless banter .. and I thoroughly enjoyed your part..
If you too have some 'matrimonial experiences' to share plz set 'em down on your blog.. it shall be fun.. having one more person in the gang to compare notes :D

i found ur blog amazing

Its not time, yet! Go on!

Wow!!

Loved this!

your writings are so surreal, yet make such a connect to real life and in my case some moments/memories of my past!!!!....
thonmenc

Many new words, and I spent time reading them, infrequent as I am, but so happy to have so much to read:)

Hi.. Where r u?

@All
Sorry for not replying
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