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There awaited another encounter, not so lucky, with his grotesque boss. She was an angry sea suddenly rendered silent by secret order. He could imbibe her violet scents, just on the authority of last night.

Sun didn’t ascend everyday; that was one time; and one day wasn’t like the other.
“ma’m, you have an appointment.”

14 comments:

Phew! Sounds pretty much like the happenstances of the corporate world!

November 3, 2009 2:41 AM  

Interesting choice of words to describe the intensity of the situation...

November 3, 2009 5:01 AM  

dentist ke jaa rahi hai? :P

November 3, 2009 6:30 AM  

waisey if there were a betting going on...i would bet 10:1 in favor of u that ure novel would turn out to be a best seller

November 3, 2009 6:31 AM  

Rakesh.. yeah.. it does.. :) thanks for the comment.

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Gyanban .. had nothing to write so was just doing some time-pass. I am glad you liked. Thank you.

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Sanely Insane.. hehe.. @ dentist! Wonderful thinking hai aapki .. and 10:1!! my my .. thanks a heap for your encouragement, means much.

November 3, 2009 8:56 AM  

very interesting take! what was it btw? :) corporate tadka?

November 3, 2009 11:03 AM  

Short and crisp.Nice post.

November 6, 2009 1:09 AM  

aria..
i din get :|

November 6, 2009 9:43 PM  

Leo.. .. it was just ‘time-pass’ :D

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Monk.. glad you liked :)

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Wildflower.. hehe. Never mind. It was really a piece of nonsense :D

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Thank you everyone for dropping by.

November 6, 2009 10:30 PM  

Lost in translation.

November 8, 2009 6:41 PM  

LOL at 'corporate tadka'...

Well well, "..imbibe her violet scents".. eh? Wish all could do that... Save us from the 'authority of the nights' though... ;)

Well written. A very clever post indeed!

Love,
Ashen

November 8, 2009 9:01 PM  

hmmm..
excellent one..the choice of words and also the images"She was an angry sea suddenly rendered silent by secret order"...
liked it much..
take care
:)

November 10, 2009 10:15 PM  

Thanks IW, Ashen and MIP for your comments :)

November 11, 2009 4:18 AM  

one things for sure, whether the sun rises from here, or there, he's prepared, to meet his Hitler. :P

December 11, 2010 11:17 AM  

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