Terminal Moraine

Two things; it is better to capture love in art and preserve it; and to go in contrary to one's own judgement, rather instinct, is not prudence - So, right you are in doing what you did!

Very well written - as always!

Is not art an attempt to understand secrets behind the nature of our own desires?dancing with our own senses..but to capture the 'moment live' you need great 'stamina'..energy and control over thoughts..like catching butterflies,it is always difficult to get the right words..
Do i need to say more and destroy the beauty this post created?
cheers!

thts why its better to let god do the painting and u can happily curse him later :P

Rakesh .. thank you. :) perhaps we need this wisdom in other matters as well ..


MIP .. As usual I love your comment which actually compliments a rather ordinary post of mine. :) Thanks a heap.


Sanely Insane .. if I let God do the painting .. mera time-pass kaisa hoga? :( thanks for your comment.

wow.. preserving love in art eh? :) nice..
isn't love an art at times? :)

Capture love in a canvas and bring it alive with your passion...stay where you are if you are happy.

Reminds me of a Robin Williams movie...what dreams may come...

Leo, Old Monk and Gyanban .. thanks guys for your comments. :)

'I could spend a lifetime shading and refining one drawing
as he revealed his body to my pencils and brushes'

..a life time!

or more..even then the fingers wont tire..

intensely written..as ever ..

I like this very much. It feels... complete. Like a fired vase, yeah?--rings solid.

... that idea of love being polished. That interwoven metaphor. Just a lovely little sculpture.

And the ending is good too--just the right note. (heard once that the hardest bit of the poem is the last line--to avoid the "thump"--which this does. In spaces.)

oh dear... *spades.

I would love to see that art, if only in my dreams, as in yours.
Sometimes, though, committal is necessary to move forward as two?

i have attempted something new..
do read

When is pause turning into play ? What about the next post?

very well written, everytime i come here and go thru the posts...im left with a sense if deja vu..of a similarity with my past!!

Absolutely wonderful. That I (though I) could understand it, made it even lovelier :p.

Long time since I read poetry on blogs or anywhere, and I'm glad I (re)started here.

Happy new year to you, aria.

regards,
asuph

Hi.. when will you be back?