Terminal Moraine

hey--you've got your "you" back!

... think you've gotten that "intoxicated"-feeling down pat. And the oblique-ness... that's good. Feel like the poem's all cross-angles. Complex in a really appealing way.

I like it. I'm going to read it again.

Hehe @ 'you' back!
Most you(s) are fictional.. still waiting for that real 'you' who would make me write a straight verse :(
Thanks so much for liking this. I thought of trying the formatting you suggested but I'm so very verbose.. so maybe next time.

Reminds me of my hay days, that were careless, blissful, bold and happy!!!!

Gal, U do some serious poetry!!

Thanks Rakesh! Its so much fun living without ‘a future’ or at least.. not caring a fig about it. I too miss my ‘younger days’ :(

why cant i comment on ur other blog? remove that 'only blogspot people can comment' thingie...

this is one is like a heady mix of vodka and whiskey... whoa...! i loved it... will hop here often...love this space...

Hii Alice! welcome to my blog :) so very glad to see you here. Sorry for that inconvenience of not being able to comment. I’ve removed that setting.
Actually I do not even like moderating but there is a creep who mostly haunts that other blog and leaves filthy comments which is why I had made it so cloistered.

Well well i like the past reflection a slight bit of optimism on the next course but then keepin it to a bit and not lookin desperate for it....

Chaggs .. thanks a lot. I like that analysis very much, makes a nice oblique pattern :D
waiting for your new post. take care.

Going through your poem I was traveling through Park street, low lit bars,Sona Gachi in Kolkata and so many dingy places the world over.Wow man!

love the first few lines...

rest-I couldn't relate to much

tc

btw happy deepavali, have a green one!

Indeed experimental and to one side. Nevertheless, it is poetic and creative.

sigh!
i guess i'm both..
breathless&speechless

Old Monk.. that was a lovely comment, thanks a lot.. have read so much about Sona Gachi that can almost imagine though haven't really seen it for real.. do drop by again :)

Neha.. Nice to see you back on blogs. Thanks for the wishes. Wishing you and your family a very Happy Diwali.. ideally I should've wished on your blog but it didn't strike me then.. me the tubelite :)

meri dictionary kahaan hai...koi meri dictionary la do :P

i liked your poetry...its simple in its complexity :P

Quackster... thank you, glad you like.. yes it was very much experimental.. or perhaps just a poetic ramble.. I always suspect that my poetry isn't exactly a conventional poem.

Wildflower.. welcome to my blog. I am so happy you dropped by.. I remember reading your post through the link Neha provided on her blog.. it was a lovely piece. :)

Hmm got the essence of this..............

Sanely Insane..Gosh.. sometimes I keep blabbering... on my posts and comments both.. if you know what I mean... :) nice to have you back.. thanks for dropping by.

Shabbir.. welcome to my blog.. and also at the right time when I answering everyone as if I am writing a thesis.. glad you got the essence :D

if u had a followers section somewhere it wud have been easier to link to ure blogs

Ohh I have zero followers so never considered having that section .. but that was sweet of you .. I'll think of adding it.

You know what this reminds me of? That song in DevD.. O Pardesi...

Straightforward, funky, haunting, and intoxicating at the same time...

Seems like you've found yourself.. hmm? :)

Love,
Ashen

Ashen .. I haven’t heard that song :( but will look for it. .infact I haven’t even watched that movie.. I just am in good mood these days .. no reason as such .. heh .. just generally .. though finding myself would take some time :D thanks so much for dropping by. Take care and have a wonderful Diwali.. must be first with NSG .. !!

We seem to have similar issues.
But when you write, don't you think less could be more?

i was imagining your brain when you wrote it.i was looking up and saw those strange lights..felt like travelling through the strets of an unknown city.to be more precise..like running through the streets of a crowded city at midnight.i was gasping.felt insecure yet excited..
it was sheer pleasure.
thanks for the ride

Yes.. First one with NSG.. Took pledges to live with each other on the very previous Diwali and poof.. one year's gone just like that.. We are arranging Nobel prizes for each other.. Deserve it you see ;)

Belated greetings to you too.. Be happy re.. we all love it when you are...

Love,
Ashen

I loved this one..infact you take me on a nice ride where i can feel every bit of emotion when you write..superb work :)

words that cast a spell
expressions that leave you speechless

A smooth flow and a dizzy aftertaste

good one


keep it rollin;)

Arthur.. welcome back to blogs, its been really long.. and to answer your question.. well.. no :) (which is why, I write more!)

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MIP.. thanks a heap.. hoping to read something new on your space soon..

Ashen.. I didn’t celebrate this year .. had decided I wouldn’t celebrate any festival/birthday this year .. lost someone very close in the very beginning of the year so just didn’t feel like... Great to know you enjoyed your time. Thanks for the wishes.. and warm hugs :)

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Ani_aset.. Thanks for all your comments. Do drop by again.

Scribbler.. Welcome to Terminal Moraine. Thank you for your kind comment. :) Hope to see you again.