the delicious blur..

>> Friday, September 18, 2009

through milky rain
of moonlit night
glaucous glimmers
from your eye pupil
enigma like
gliding drowsily
crushing yet intangible
settling tenderly
on moldering hearts
spread in their
damask chastity
a hint of rococo
within roseate tinge
every trace of gray
disappearing
ruddy streaks
on my pallid cheeks
the blush of
passionate kiss
when words cease
music scarcely begins
your half-closed eyes
look into mine
and life becomes
a delicious blur ..

12 comments:

Nash September 18, 2009 at 10:21 PM  

"when words cease
music scarcely begins
your half-closed eyes
look into mine
and life becomes
a delicious blur .."

Delicious one.
Unlike you but lovely.

Leo September 19, 2009 at 12:30 AM  

wow! if my short poem is poignant, your long one is lovely! :)

the start itself had that attraction to it... milky rain of moonlit night, imagery was nice... could imagine this :) :)

Kunjubi September 19, 2009 at 7:49 AM  

Aria... This indeed is very romantic and creates a nostalgia somewhere in the far corner of the mind. Really enjoyed your master strokes after a long time..

Cheers and be optimistic. Kunjubi

Perry Strange September 20, 2009 at 5:44 PM  

sultry. "life becomes a delicious blur..."

and isn't that exactly the way it happens? put a half-smile on my face. ;)

scarlettwrites September 20, 2009 at 7:07 PM  

WOW. Aria. Just WOW. You had it nailed at "milky rain". This was like watching poetry spill out of a vial of perfume. Surreal :)

Cheers,
Scarlett

aria September 20, 2009 at 11:27 PM  

Nash.. thanks.. yes it was unlike the usual me :)

Leo.. thank you.. glad you appreciate.

Kunjubi.. glad to see you here after such a long time.. thanks for the wishes and your lovely comments.

Perry.. and your comment brought a grin :D thank you.

Scarlett.. delighted to see you here.. honored.. truly by your comment.. thanks much :)

ani_aset September 21, 2009 at 5:18 AM  

take a bow...what lovely writing :)

MAN IN PAINTING September 21, 2009 at 9:15 PM  

excellent...
..life becomes
a delicious blur..
loved those lines

Quackster September 21, 2009 at 11:04 PM  

I felt like I was lifted into the air by a cloud, drifting toward a dream of great fantasy. Nice stuff!

Rakesh Vanamali September 21, 2009 at 11:13 PM  

Tumultuous, romantic, attractive, passionate ...... life! Wonderful lines as always!

aria September 22, 2009 at 2:55 AM  

Ani... bahot shukriya.. (I didn't say thanks!) :)

Man in painting... long time! Nice to see you.. kept checking your blog often.. I hope we'd get to read from you frequently.. thanks for dropping by :)

Quackster... thank you for that lovely comment.

Rakesh... much thanks for your kind words, as always :)

Old Monk September 24, 2009 at 3:46 AM  

Loved each line...beautiful.

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