Terminal Moraine

"when words cease
music scarcely begins
your half-closed eyes
look into mine
and life becomes
a delicious blur .."

Delicious one.
Unlike you but lovely.

wow! if my short poem is poignant, your long one is lovely! :)

the start itself had that attraction to it... milky rain of moonlit night, imagery was nice... could imagine this :) :)

Aria... This indeed is very romantic and creates a nostalgia somewhere in the far corner of the mind. Really enjoyed your master strokes after a long time..

Cheers and be optimistic. Kunjubi

sultry. "life becomes a delicious blur..."

and isn't that exactly the way it happens? put a half-smile on my face. ;)

WOW. Aria. Just WOW. You had it nailed at "milky rain". This was like watching poetry spill out of a vial of perfume. Surreal :)

Cheers,
Scarlett

Nash.. thanks.. yes it was unlike the usual me :)

Leo.. thank you.. glad you appreciate.

Kunjubi.. glad to see you here after such a long time.. thanks for the wishes and your lovely comments.

Perry.. and your comment brought a grin :D thank you.

Scarlett.. delighted to see you here.. honored.. truly by your comment.. thanks much :)

take a bow...what lovely writing :)

excellent...
..life becomes
a delicious blur..
loved those lines

I felt like I was lifted into the air by a cloud, drifting toward a dream of great fantasy. Nice stuff!

Tumultuous, romantic, attractive, passionate ...... life! Wonderful lines as always!

Ani... bahot shukriya.. (I didn't say thanks!) :)

Man in painting... long time! Nice to see you.. kept checking your blog often.. I hope we'd get to read from you frequently.. thanks for dropping by :)

Quackster... thank you for that lovely comment.

Rakesh... much thanks for your kind words, as always :)

Loved each line...beautiful.