Fucktastic

>> Tuesday, August 26, 2008

neither lewd nor respectable, in
short enough distance from you
to appear suspiciously intriguing
despite my teasing proximity
conspicuously puzzling centrality,
evanescing, a struggling stammerer
still subduing the nemesis syllable
not a stone-throwing lover, but
a word-throwing poet, unlike you
soft, sentimental and ineffective,
I'd leave behind paroles, besides
a delightful playful word itself,
the sonic prankishness of
two syllabic pops and closing click
encasing unobtrusive twin vowels.


You were Fucktastic

16 comments:

Vinay August 26, 2008 at 8:18 AM  

the title was the one that grabbed my attention...
words are nice...sentiment behind the words i cant decipher as yet...
am readin it over and over, yet...its a mystery to me...!!

goatman August 26, 2008 at 10:19 AM  

"the sonic prankishness of
two syllabic pops and closing click"
masterful expression from the master.

If I may be bold I would suggest you investigate: http://www.thesunmagazine.org/
This is a monthly magazine with no advertising which accepts short stories, photos, and poetry from it's readers -- and pays them for the submittal if printed. The photos are all black and white and the words are mostly well thought.
I have hoped for my words to be in it one day; but I must say that your flavorful words would be more appealing.
Just a thought . . .

Nash August 26, 2008 at 11:43 AM  

And YOU are fantastic!

Inconsequential August 26, 2008 at 2:16 PM  

lol

Inconsequential August 26, 2008 at 2:16 PM  

in a positive way :)

aria August 26, 2008 at 9:11 PM  

Vinay.. thank you for your lovely comment.. what I write is often a mystery for me too :D

Goatman.. thank you so much. I'll certainly check that site... it was really kind of you.. I'm honored. :) and I am sure your words would be there someday.. you do write beautifully.. I mean it!

Nash.. hope it was funtastic too. thank you, always.

Inconsequential.. heh thank a heap... I am glad at least something evoked a laughter and it was meant to be funcaustic :D

Chaggoholic.... August 26, 2008 at 11:13 PM  

Amazing use of words too many of them makin me run thru the net and sometimes the dictionary as well to interpret the right meaning and substance in the words said. Fuck it is good ;)

Chaggoholic.... August 26, 2008 at 11:14 PM  

Amazing use of words too many of them makin me run thru the net and sometimes the dictionary as well to interpret the right meaning and substance in the words said. Fuck it is good ;)

MAN IN PAINTING August 27, 2008 at 5:42 AM  

Sorry for being..As you know well that i am a 'full time dad' these days..lol
lovely..
Rythm..
that is what i found unique this one..A strange sense of timing originates.. spontaneous dancing of words..
I am not much bothered amount meanings these days..
your words just soothe(?)(i again forget speelings..you got na?)that "thing"rules me called "ME"
and that is enough for me..
NOW I AM GOING TO READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN..and make it mine
you go and check my blog to see what is DEMOCRAZY!
lol
take care..
MIP

Rushabhh Gandhi August 27, 2008 at 11:44 AM  

Fucktastic.... indeed!

The Wandering Hermit August 27, 2008 at 3:51 PM  

sounds to me like: Wanted a lover, never bargained for you...

The wordplay here was as good as foreplay
simply Fucktastic!!
lol
cheers
z

aria August 28, 2008 at 2:32 AM  

Chaggoholic.. welcome to my blog.. hehe nice comment .. thanks. :)

Man in Painting.. don't worry about being late.. I do understand.. your words always delight.. whenever they come.. thanks much.

Rushabhh.. welcome aboard.. thank you :)

Zofo.. lol.. thanks! your comment was also fucktastic!

Jim August 28, 2008 at 11:34 AM  

Hi Aria!

AshenGlow August 29, 2008 at 1:32 AM  

:)
One question... Did the title come to your mind after you were through with the poetry? Or did the poetry follow the title?

Interesting read it was, aria. A word throwing poet indeed!

aria August 29, 2008 at 11:22 AM  

Jim.. Hello! Welcome! thanks for dropping by :)

Ashen.. hehe thats a good question.. the title came to my mind after the poetry.. and then I added the last line.. :D thank you for your comment.

Pushkar Arora August 30, 2008 at 6:12 AM  

Gotta add this word to my vocab now....

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