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>> Friday, April 25, 2008

She recalled the tang in throat when her head bounced off. She was accustomed to familiar, secure. This moment appeared gluey, sluggish.

She tried capturing her face, retrieved chiseled lines that made her sad, so did her olive hands, ragged fingernails, crinkles on corners of eyes and news that life would go on and on.

14 comments:

Alok April 25, 2008 at 9:12 AM  

the news tht life would go on and on .... made her sad - the punch line for me in this piece and the one that justifies the title ...

but then the fact remains tht life does go on .. and on .. and on ... and then there are choices and there are options .. and then too life goes on .... wht say :)


Alok

Inconsequential April 25, 2008 at 9:44 AM  

Sheer horror.


life going on and on and on...

The Hermit of Wandering Thoughts April 25, 2008 at 12:46 PM  

viscous and vicious it seemed to me reading this...

The shore looks distant but one day the ship will dock, so it is fated..

sailing the ocean of life can lead to some interesting times & perhaps one day you will change your outlook and then life will seem so short and fleeting..

The secret is to discover a passion.. The tides of time will take care of the rest....

nilesh April 25, 2008 at 11:02 PM  

Familiar, Secure... Grey, Sluggish... Mmmm nice style... D, Your writing's got a scintillating flair, aura. Yeah yeah I know... I'm beginning to mimic you... :):)

Casperbaba April 26, 2008 at 1:54 AM  

...........

:)

aria April 26, 2008 at 6:33 AM  

Alok.. true.. if there are no choices/options.. it still would go on and on.. btw.. when I wrote it first, it had one more 'and on'.. it was erased due to words constraint. Thanks for your comment.

Inconsequential.. :) you said it. Thank you for your words.

Zofo.. as usual, thanks much, for your lovely comment.

Nilesh.. welcome aboard.. great to see you here.. thank you.

Casper.. Thank you for dropping by.

shooting star April 26, 2008 at 7:34 AM  

im clueless!!!

τ ħ€ ĐάЎđяёάmёя April 26, 2008 at 10:59 AM  

did i said that both of ur blog looks cool..

rite now m dead drunk will come to read ur blog later :)

Dredger April 26, 2008 at 11:18 AM  

:) i liked!

Nash April 26, 2008 at 11:31 PM  

This news that life would go and on and on when you are ageing is worse.

aria April 27, 2008 at 2:22 AM  

Shooting star.. so am I :D thank you for dropping by.

Day dreamer.. that was the best time to read me @ drunk :) glad you liked my blogs. the other one is 'defunct' but I added few pictures recently.. thanks to blogger for making it simple. Thanks much, for appreciating.

Dredger.. Thank you. Nice to see you.

Nash.. *sigh* you are pretty close again. thanks a lot.

Dredger April 28, 2008 at 6:41 AM  

im always popping by. just cause i dont comment doesn mean im not there :) have faith!

Kunjubi April 28, 2008 at 8:38 AM  

You did a good job! 'certain thoughts are prayers. There are moments when, whatever will be the attitude of the body, the soul is on its knees.' This is one moment like that... Congrats. kunjubi

aria April 28, 2008 at 8:53 AM  

Dredger.. Ok! I'll take your word @ faith. thanks again.

Kunjubi.. thank you.

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